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{Tessa}
I'm most likely going to make a comic series since I've quit on my animation series. I already planned out the series kind of.
Here's a brief summary of it -
A girl has troubles with her life. Her father hates her, her mother only cares about money, her best friend doesn't care about her feelings at all and only talks to her to be cheered up, she gets bullied in school for her weird features, and the guy she has interest in is dating the girl that hates her the most. She continues to think about what she done wrong in the past to make things like this happen. She wants to change it. But the more she thinks about changing it,
the more things started to change.

edit - nevermind. I decided to change the storyline.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
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First of all , this is a very cute design and I love the colors. The bounce back and forth between gray and pink is nice.

Where I think you are lacking the most is anatomy. I'm not seeing a whole lot of construction. I strongly encourage the use of construction lines, drawing the skeleton or basic shapes out before adding details. This was a big drawback for me when I started drawing. Mapping out the whole body first allows it to look more natural. Where it is most evident are the legs, they just dont look like they are part of her body, they don't look like a continuation of her form.

Another quick fix I notice is that her head is turned to our left, but the way we see her pony tails suggests that it is turned to the right (the pony tail on the right is hidden behind the head as if she is turned in that direction). So the direction of the pony tail and of the head seem opposite of each other.

The last thing, very small, is her cleavage. It really shouldn't be there, not that far up, with her chest being so small.


I hope that was helpful! This is a nice drawing, please continue!